Question

【题目】乐于助人是我们中华民族的传统美德。作为一名中学生，在日常生活中要学会帮助他人。假如你叫张华，最近正在和美国笔友Tonny通过邮件讨论“帮助”的话题，他想了解在日常生活中你是怎样帮助他/她人的。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。

注意：1.词数90左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。

2.可适当发挥，使短文通顺、连贯。

3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。

Dear Tonny,

Nice to hear from you. As a middle school student, I’m always ready to help others.

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Yours,

Zhang Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tonny,

Nice to hear from you. As a middle school student, I’m always ready to help others.

I still remember I helped a girl with her maths when we were in Grade Eight. Li Hong, one of my classmates, was not good at maths, but I did well. So one day, I went to help her . Her big smile made me feel good. From then on, whenever she had problems, she would ask me for help, and I was patient to explain them to her. Little by little, her maths improved with my help. At the same time, I found my maths better too.

Everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. In fact, helping others is helping ourselves.

Yours

Zhang Hua

【解析】这是一封信的格式，信中让叙述是怎样帮助他/她人的，根据提示如果举例叙述过去是怎样帮助别人的，句子应该用一般过去时，句子的主语用第一人称，要从提示的三个方面来写，一是你帮助了谁；二是被帮助的人怎么啦，或者说有什么困难或问题；三是你怎样帮助他的。所写的句子应该符合英语语法，要使用自己熟悉的词汇及句型。短文用了一些短语和句式，如:help sb with sth帮助某人做某事；be patient to do sth耐心去做某事；at the same time同时。用了when，that（宾语从句中可省略）引导的从句，增加了文章的亮点。