题目内容
【题目】学校于今年暑假举办夏令营活动以后,向全校发起了“愉快夏令营”的征文比赛,请你根据以下信息写一篇征文稿。短文开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。
要求:1. 将所给信息全部体现在文章中,并适当发挥;
2. 条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确,书写规范、清晰;
3. 约60词。
Weather: sunny
Activities: ●Morning: go swimming, play in the water...
●Afternoon: play beach volleyball, relax on the beach...
●Night: have a party, play games...
Feelings: tired, happy...
Last Sunday I went to summer camp with my classmates.
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【答案】Last Sunday I went to summer camp with my classmates. It was sunny and warm. We went to the beach by bus.
In the morning, we went swimming and played in the water. In the afternoon, we played beach volleyball and relaxed ourselves on the beach. At night, we had a big party. We sang, danced and played games.
My summer camp was really interesting. I was tired but happy.
【解析】
这篇作文要求根据题目要求记叙一次夏令营的活动。题目中给出了大概的提纲,是用关键词的形式展示出来的。学生们需要根据这些提示,自己发挥想象力,组织语言,充实内容,串联成文,这是写作中的一个难点。其次需要注意文章的表达,英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的,因此不能逐词翻译提纲,而应从文章的整体考虑,选择使用适当的时态、人称,并注意变化动词、名词的形式。通过分析可知,这篇短文记叙的是过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时态,所以动词应变为过去式形式,尤其是要注意不规则动词的过去式。句式表达应以简单句为主,为提升文章档次,穿插使用并列句或复合句,并使用一些高级句型和词汇,如非谓语动词、固定句型等。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使上下文意思连贯。
【题目】书面表达(共1小题,满分20分)
你班新转入一位来自澳大利亚的同学,名叫Sophia。请根据表格提供的信息,写一篇短文,介绍Sophia及班级的情况,并对Sophia的到来表示欢迎。
About Sophia | About the class |
from Sydney, 15 years old | hard-working |
outgoing, happy | helpful, get along well |
good at swimming | groupwork |
… | … |
注意:(1)短文内容可适当增加;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数:80-100;
(4)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
短文首句:Hello, class, May I have your attention, please?
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