题目内容
【题目】书面表达。
假如你是刘伟,你在英国的笔友Jim对中国的传统节日很感兴趣,他来信询问有关情况。请你给他回一封电子邮件,简单介绍中国的传统节日。今天是端午节,请你重点介绍中国人一般是如何过端午节的。
注意:1. 80~100词左右。
2.可以结合自己的情况适当增加细节,以便行文连贯。
3.开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail.
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What do you think of the Dragon Boat Festival? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Liu Wei
【答案】Dear Jim,
I am glad to receive your e-mail.The Dragon Boat Festival ,also called the Duanwu Festival,is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calender.People always eat rice dumplings and watch dragon boat races to celebrate it.
The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes.It’s very popular.
The rice dumpling is made of rice,meat and so on.You can eat different kinds of rice dumplings.They are very delicious .And Dragon Boat Festival is for Qu Yuan.He is an honest minister who is said to have drown himself in the river.
Overall,the Dragon Boat Festival is very interesting!
What do you think of the Dragon Boat Festival?Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Liu Wei
【解析】亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语,例如be glad to,the Dragon Boat Festival,according to,the Chinese calender,dragon boat races,in the southern places,be made of,and so on,different kinds of,in the river,looking forward to等。而The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes./ He is an honest minister who is said to have drown himself in the river.等定语从句的运用,丰富了短文内容,使语言表达多样化,是本文的最大亮点。