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12．最近，网友自发发起旨在倡导厉行节约，反对浪费的"光盘行动"（clear the plate），引起众多媒体和网友的热烈反响．请根据以下信息，以"My opinion on clearing the plate"为题谈谈自己对这一问题的认识和看法．
注意：1．词数：80-100；
2．可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯，语言流畅；
3．不可透露学校、个人等任何真实信息．

"光盘行动"	1．在家里用餐吃多少盛多少，吃光自己盘中的食物； 2．在外就餐将吃剩的菜打包回家；
好   处	1．可以避免浪费，减少污染， 2．能养成我们勤俭节约、尊重粮食的好习惯．

My opinion on clearing the plate
In modern days more andmore people get richer and richer and as they begin to live a happier life，they pay less attention to food-saving．Nobody worries about food and few canthink of the people in hanger in the other parts of the world．
Recently plenty ofE-pals/net-friends carry out a clear-the-plate action on the Internet，callingon the people to save food．It suggests that we should never only eat what welike best and advises getting suitable amount of food that we can have at home．On one hand we are told to eat up all we have on our plates．On the other handwhen we go out for dinner，we must pack home all we didn't finish．In this waynot only can we save a lot of food，reduce the rubbish but also we can form agood habit of saving．
Let's join in clearing the plate．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是以"My opinion on clearing the plate"为题谈谈自己对"光盘行动"的认识和看法．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．"光盘行动"；在家里用餐吃多少盛多少，吃光自己盘中的食物；在外就餐将吃剩的菜打包回家；
2．好处；可以避免浪费，减少污染．能养成我们勤俭节约、尊重粮食的好习惯．

常用到的重点短语：
比较级+and+比较级 越来越…
pay attention to  关注
worry about 担心
call on 号召
on one hand…，on the other hand…一方面…另一方面…
eat up 吃光
not only…but also…不仅…而且…

【高分句型】
1．It suggests ①that we should never only eat②what we like best and ③advises getting suitable amount of food ④that we can have at home．
①that引导的宾语从句，作为suggest的宾语．
②what作为引导词的宾语从句，作为eat的宾语．
③advise doing sth 建议做某事
④that作为关系词的定语从句，that作为从句的宾语，修饰先行词food．
2．①On one hand we②are told to eat up all③we have on our plates．On the other hand ④when we go out for dinner，we must pack home all⑤we didn't finish．
①on one hand…，on the other hand…一方面…另一方面…
②一般现在时的被动语态am/is/are+过去分词． tell sb to do sth 让某人做某事
③省略了关系词that的定语从句，that作为从句的宾语故省略，修饰先行词all．
④when引导的时间状语从句
⑤省略了关系词that的定语从句，that作为从句的宾语故省略，修饰先行词all．
3．In this way not only can we save a lot of food，reduce the rubbish but also we can form a good habit of saving
not only…but also…不仅…而且…连接两个对等的成分
not only放句首引起主谓倒装．

解答 My opinion on clearing the plates
In modern days more and more people get richer and richer and as they begin to live a happier life，they pay less attention to food-saving．Nobody worries about food and few can think of the people in hanger in the other parts of the world．
Recently plenty of E-pals/net-friends carry out a clear-the-plate action on the Internet，calling on the people to save food．It suggests that we should never only eat what we like best and advises getting suitable amount of food that we can have at home【高分句型】．On one hand we are told to eat up all we have on our plates．On the other hand when we go out for dinner，we must pack home all we didn't finish．【高分句型】（"光盘行动"的内容）In this way not only can we save a lot of food，reduce the rubbish but also we can form a good habit of saving．（好处）【高分句型】
Let's join in clearing the plate．

点评 这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文．主要介绍光盘行动的内容及它的好处．在写作是要注意句子的连贯性．不能只是照着提示翻译．
这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整．词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语例如：richer and richer，It suggests that…，advices getting suitable amount of food that we can have at home，On one hand，On the other hand，In this way，not only，but also等．