题目内容
书面表达(10分)
以为题写一篇80词左右的文章,文章要包括以下内容:
1 起身晚,所以希望上学迟,放学早。有更多空余时间;
2学校餐厅大而明亮,可以在那吃饭或者聊天;
3 每天上电脑课,每人有台电脑,可以玩游戏;
4 有很多书的图书馆,还有游泳池等;
5希望作业少,课外活动多,周末不要做作业。
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My ideal school starts late because I like sleeping. It finishes early,so we have more free time. We have an hour for lunch .We can eat fruit, vegetables and healthy food. We can even choose any food you like in the dining hall. The dining hall is very big and clean. We can meet our friends and chat there .I think we will have a good time there .We have Computer Studies everyday because I like playing computer very much. I love reading, so we have many libraries. We have a swimming pool. And we don't have homework and exams. Twice a week ,we go on a school trip to a park or any other beautiful city!
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,介绍我理想的学校。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时,人称为第一人称,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:have a good time;Twice a week,等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意本文要根据文章所列出的要点大纲逐个描述,不可遗漏。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了自己理想学校的上课时间,餐厅等设施,接下来指出学校的教学环境,最后指出想要的娱乐活动。
考点:提纲作文。