Question

【题目】写作

今年春节晚会上，很多人加入了抢红包游戏活动，但也有人表示担忧。假如你叫李华，你班最近开展了一个有关抢红包游戏活动的调查。请你用英文给学校校刊《英语园地》写一封信，介绍此次调查的结果并谈谈你的观点。

参考词汇：抢红包grabbing red packets

要 求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；

3）词数：100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

Dear Editor，

I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class.

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Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor，

I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class. About 70% of the students took part in the game in my class. About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment and can bring them more fun. It can bring people closer so that they can make more friends. Grapping red packets had been part of people’s lives. However， about 25% of them are worried about the activity. They say some people spend too much time grapping red packets. As a result， they don’t have enough communication with their family members. As a result， they may feel a little lonely. Moreover， looking at the screen for too long is harmful to people’s eyes. Grapping red packets on the street might cause traffic accidents.

I think this game is really exciting， but we should spend more time communicating with our family members.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文根据所给信息可知，会使用到一般现在时。然后灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：本文内容符合题意，叙事条理清晰，描述自然流畅，发挥恰当，切合要求。文中使用了不少固定词组如：took part in be worried about， spend...doing...， feel lonely， be harmful to 等； 还使用了丰富的句型，如so that引导的目的状语从句，宾语从句等；同时使用了恰当的连词，如however，as a result等使文意更加连贯；为短文增色不少。