Question

【题目】现在，上网已经变得越来越流行了，很多学生都迷上了网络。你是怎么看待上网的？请谈谈你的观点。提示如下：
1）因特网使得交流更加简单，它已成为人们日常生活最重要的部分之一；
2）很多同学每天上网学习，发电子邮件……
3）但是还有很多同学沉迷于上网聊天，打电脑游戏，这对他们的健康很不利。
4）作为学生，我们应该以学习为先……

Answer 1

【答案】Internet has made communication much easier. It has become one of the most important parts in people's daily life. Many students use the Internet to study, send emails and search for information. But many others are crazy about chatting online or playing computer games. It is bad for their health. As students, we should know study comes first. And we should spend more time doing sports instead of playing computer games.
【解析】本文叙述了现在上网已经变得越来越流行了，很多学生都迷上了网络。叙述的是现在的情况，所以句子的时态应该用现在时，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，用一些高级词汇。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：in people's daily life在人们的日常生活中； search for information寻找信息；be bad for 对某物或某人有害；sb spend some time doing 某人花费时间做某事； instead of代替。用了连词but，and等，增加了文章的亮点。