Question

9．假如你是李华，你的朋友玲玲写信向你抱怨（complain）没有时间做作业，没有时间锻炼…..，她就这些问题向你寻求帮助，请你以如何合理安排时间给她写一封回信．
提示：学习方面：做好学习计划，上课认真听讲，高效完成作业．
锻炼方面：利用早上和周末锻炼．
其他建议：①，②，…．
注意：（1）词数80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文章应该包括写信的背景和提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校．
Dear Lingling，
I am glad to hear from you．
I am glad to talk about my advice on how to plan time well．
You complained that you have no time to do your homework．I think you should plan your day carefully and spend your time in a proper way．You can make a plan about your study，listen to the teacher carefully in class and do your homework whenever you have time．
You also said you don't have enough time for exercise．You can do it in the morning and on weekends．I also think you should cut down the time playing out with your friends．Don't spend too much playing computer games or listening to the music，though they are really relaxing．
I hope you think my advice is of some help to you．
Hope things work out．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
You complained that you have no time to do your homework你抱怨没有时间做作业．
that引导的宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
Don't spend too much playing computer games or listening to the music，though they are really relaxing不要花太多时间玩电脑游戏听音乐，虽然真的很放松．
though引导的让步状语从句，

解答 Dear Lingling，
   I am glad to hear from you．
   I am glad to talk about my advice on how to plan time well．
You complained that you have no time to do your homework【高分句型一】．I think you should plan your day carefully and spend your time in a proper way．You can make a plan about your study，listen to the teacher carefully in class and do your homework whenever you have time．（学习方面）
You also said you don't have enough time for exercise．You can do it in the morning and on weekends．（锻炼方面）I also think you should cut down the time playing out with your friends．Don't spend too much playing computer games or listening to the music，though they are really relaxing．（其他建议）【高分句型二】
   I hope you think my advice is of some help to you．
   Hope things work out．
 
                                                                Yours，
 
                                                             Li Hua

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