Question

假设你是李阳，你北京的笔友方舟听说你现在与过去比有很大变化，他写信询问你。请根据以下信息，写一封回信。

1、五年不见，自己的变化很大（身高、体型、性格等）；

2、过去不喜欢英语，现在的对英语很感兴趣，而且考试中取得好的成绩；

3、问方舟能否告诉你如何与同学相处得融洽；

4、很想去北京玩，想知道哪里有吃北京烤鸭（Beijing Duck）的好地方；

5、邀请李阳到你家玩，简单介绍乘车路线。

关键词：used to, become interested in , get on well with ;

要求：字数80字左右。

Dear Fang Zhou,

How are you doing?

 

 

 

 

I am looking forward to seeing you again！

Yours

Li Yang

 

Answer 1

Dear Fang Zhou,

How are you doing?I haven’t seen you for five years.Have you changed a lot?I am taller and stronger than before.I didn’t use to like English,but now I become interested in it.So I have got good grades in the exams.I used to be quiet,now I’m more outgoing.But I don’t know how to get on well with classmates.Could you tell me what I should do.I want to go to Beijing.I want to know which is the place to eat Beijing Duck.Do you want to come to my home?Now let me tell you the way to my home.You can take NO.301 bus to Xinji Station.Then take NO.205 bus to Renmin Hospital.My home is near the hospital.I will wait for you at the hospital.

I am looking forward to seeing you again！

Yours

Li Yang

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们以过去和现在进行比较写一篇作文，在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲，主要包括五方面的内容。

本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者从那几个方面，一一介绍的很详细，没有遗漏任何的知识点。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如But I don’t know how to get on well with classmates.Could you tell me what I should do. I want to know which is the place to eat Beijing Duck.等，大量的运用了宾语从句，学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：提纲类作文。