Question

【题目】书面表达

学校正在选举美德少年（Virtue Teenager）。假如你是王彦，你想推荐你的同学刘佳当选学校的美德少年，请你根据所给提示，用英文写一份推荐信。

姓名	刘佳
年龄	15岁
性格	善良，乐于助人（上周六，她在博物馆帮助一个小男孩找到妈妈。）
愿望	将来（in the future）想当一名医生(doctor)，帮助更多的人。
其它情况	1. 就读于七（4）班。 2. 对自己要求严格；每天坚持锻炼。 3. 在周末经常照顾年迈的爷爷。

要求：

1．80词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2．语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。

3．内容必须包括上表中的要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to recommend( 推荐) Liu Jia for the Virtue Teenager.

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So I think Liu Jia is our best choice(选择), I hope you’ll agree with me.

Yours

Wang Yan

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to recommend( 推荐) Liu Jia for the virtue teenager.

Liu Jia is 15 years old, she studies in Class 4, Grade 7. She is always strict with herself. She studies hard and exercises every morning, so she is good at study and sports. She is also a kind girl, she often helps others. Last Saturday, a little boy couldn’t find his mother in the museum, she helped him find his mother. And she often looks after her old grandfather on weekends. She wants to be a doctor in the future, because she wants to help more people.

So I think Liu Jia is our best choice(选择), I hope you’ll agree with me.

Yours

Wang Yan

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，我想推荐我的同学刘佳当选学校的美德少年，写一份推荐信。

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我和我的朋友。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I would like to recommend……，Liu Jia is……，She wants to be……，So I think……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。