Question

9．根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信．信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内．请不要写出你的校名和姓名．
假如你叫李亮，最近和英国朋友May通过电子邮件谈论帮助他人．请你根据她的问题回复邮件．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I think it is important for us to help others．
句中"it is important for us to help others"为宾语从句，使用的句式为：it is+形容词+for sb to do sth．其中"it"为形式主语，代指"to help others"．这句话意为：我认为对我们来说帮助别人很重要．
高分句型二：
I think I will do the same in the future because it can bring me and other people happiness．
句中"I will do the same in the future"为宾语从句，"because it can bring me and other people happiness"为原因状语从句．这句话意为：我认为将来我也会这样做，因为它能带给我和他人幸福．

解答 Hi，Mary！I'm glad to hear from you．I think it is important for us to help others．【高分句型一】And I like it very much．（表明自己的观点）I remember I helped the old people in the old people's home last Saturday．I cleaned the room and the windows for them．I told them some interesting stories．I sang some English songs and they really enjoyed it．（我帮助别人的事情）I think I will do the same in the future because it can bring me and other people happiness．【高分句型二】（我将来会做的）
Yours，
Li Liang

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．