Question

5．请你以心理医生Mr．Green的名义给Tom一些晚上更好休息以及如何放宽心态，积极备战的建议．要求通顺达意．字数在80-100词之间．
参考词汇：relax；  healthy；  happy；  confident （自信的）…
Dear Tom，
I'm glad to hear from you．In my opinion，though the exam is very important，you shouldn't worry so much．On the opposite，you should try your best to relax．
Here is some advice for you．First you should do some sports．It can not only help you keep healthy but also make you feel confident．Then before you go to bed，why not listen to some light music？I think it is easy for you to go to sleep．Or you can count sheep．It is also a simple way to help you to get to sleep．Besides，it is a good idea to talk with your friends．After all two heads are better than one．
I hope these are useful and you can do well in the exam．Come on!I believe you and you should believe yourself．
Best wishes!
Yours truly，
Mr．Green．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
It can not only help you keep healthy but also make you feel confident．它不仅能帮助你保持健康，而且能让你感到自信．not only …but also不仅…而且．
高分句型二
I hope these are useful and you can do well in the exam我希望这些有用，你能考得好．这是一个宾语从句，I hope是主句，后面的是宾语从句．

解答 Dear Tom，
I'm glad to hear from you．In my opinion，though the exam is very important，you shouldn't worry so much．On the opposite，you should try your best to relax．【开篇点明主题】
Here is some advice for you．First you should do some sports．It can not only help you keep healthy but also make you feel confident【高分句型一，注意固定句型的使用】．Then before you go to bed，why not listen to some light music？I think it is easy for you to go to sleep．Or you can count sheep．It is also a simple way to help you to get to sleep．Besides，it is a good idea to talk with your friends．After all two heads are better than one．
I hope these are useful and you can do well in the exam【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】．Come on!I believe you and you should believe yourself．【正文部分详细介绍自己的建议】
Best wishes!

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