Question

你觉得你的校园生活安全吗？请你以“How to Keep Safe in School”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。

内容包括：

描述一件发生在你身上或你看到的发生在校园里的意外事件（经过与结果）

提出解决这种校园意外事件的建议（至少两条）

呼吁每个学生要注意校园安全

作文要求：

1．不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生真实姓名。如需使用学校名称或学生的姓名，请一律使用Hill School和Tom。

2．语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文开头已经给出，不计入总词数.

How to Keep Safe in School

Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example,

 

Answer 1

How to Keep Safe in School

Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example, one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway. Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor. So, he had to stay in hospital for two weeks.

So I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways. And the teachers had better keep an eye on the students after class and stop them from running.

At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者先发生在校园里的意外事件，提出解决这种校园意外事件的建议，并呼吁每个学生要注意校园安全。描述发生的事件用一般过去时，建议与呼吁用一般现在时态。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如For example, ran after,each other,fell down, had to,stay in hospital,So I think,had better ,keep an eye on,after class,stop them from running,at last, pay attention to等短语，文中还用到了条件状语从句if we are not careful enough; 原因状语从句because of the wet floor; 宾语从句Do you know that....,So I think...,I hope ... 文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文