Question

14．上周日我和Sandy去野生动物园参观，了解到很多动物的生存现状，想在School newsletter上发文呼吁同学们共同保护动物．请就下面表格提示内容写一篇80词左右的短文．
内容提示：

现状	居无定所	无食可觅
原因	人类不断砍伐森林和侵占土地	温度降至零度以下
应对措施	不仅可以立法，还可以多建自然保护区（nature reserve）
建议	作为中学生，…

注意：
1．短文须包括所有提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2．第5个要点的内容须展开合理想象，适当发挥1-2句；
3．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Last Sunday，Sandy and I went to the Wildlife Park．        ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
We learnt that wildlife had nowhere to live because humans kept cutting down forests and taking lands．
句中"that wildlife had nowhere to live"为宾语从句，"because humans kept cutting down forests and taking lands"为原因状语从句．句中短语有"keep doing sth  持续做某事"．这句话意为：我们了解到动物居无定所，因为人类不断砍伐森林和侵占土地．
高分句型二：
We can not only make laws but also build more nature reserves to protect the animals from being killed．
句中使用短语有"not only…but also…不仅…而且…"、"protect sb from doing sth  保护…免受…"．这句话意为：我们不仅可以立法，还可以多建自然保护区来保护动物免受杀害．

解答 Last Sunday，Sandy and I went to the Wildlife Park．We learnt that wildlife had nowhere to live because humans kept cutting down forests and taking lands．【高分句型一】Also when the temperature dropped below zero，wildlife had no food to eat．（动物的生存现状）We should take action to prevent natural disasters and protect wildlife．We can not only make laws but also build more nature reserves to protect the animals from being killed．【高分句型二】As students，we should always ask our parents and relatives not to buy any fur coats．We should try to keep our world clean and peace．（提出建议）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．