Question

【题目】假设你参加了你班组织的郊外野餐活动。请你根据以下内容写一篇短文，以便发表在某英文杂志上。

活动时间	上星期六	出发	8：00	返回	下午3：00
集合地点	学校大门口
活动地点	人民公园（People's Park）
活动内容	划船、野餐、参观动物园、拍照片
交通方式	乘坐公共汽车

要求：1.词数在70左右；　2.不能遗漏所给信息。

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Answer 1

【答案】Today is Sunday. We went to People’s Park by bus last Saturday. We met at the school gate. We started at eight

o’clock in the morning and returned at three o’clock in the afternoon.We went boating on the lake and had a picnic on the grass.Then we visited the zoo and saw many animals. We took a lot of photos in the park. We had a good time that day.

【解析】假设你参加了你班组织的郊外野餐活动。这篇作文写得不错，语句连贯，发挥得当，而且还用到了几个优美的句子。句子结构较复杂，但表达正确。这为作文增添了不少色彩。