Question

6．假如你是 Ben，你们班上的同学 Judy 不幸身患重病，急需救助，你们班决定举行一次捐款活动来帮助她．请向校长张老师写一封申请信．

原因	帮助患病的Judy 同学
计划	目的：为 Judy筹款； 时间：本周五下午 3.00-5.00 地点：在学校图书馆前面
活动	一些同学举行旧书义卖活动； 一些同学剪纸和做纸花义卖；…
希望	得到老师的批准和支持

Dear Mr Zhang，
We are writing to ask permission to have a voluntary activity．          ．
Yours sincerely，Ben．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In order to help Judy，we are going to raise money for her．
句中短语有："in order to do sth 为了做某事"、"be going to do sth 将要做某事"、"raise money 筹钱"．这句话意为：为了帮助Judy，我们打算为她筹钱．
高分句型二：
I hope you can support us．
句中"you can support us．"为宾语从句．这句话意为：我希望你可以支持我们．

解答 Dear Mr Zhang，
We are writing to ask permission to have a voluntary activity．My classmate Judy was badly ill．We were worried about her．（筹款的原因）
In order to help Judy，we are going to raise money for her．【高分句型一】We would like to have the activity in front of our school library．The time is from 3：00 p．m to 5：00 p．m Friday afternoon．（筹款计划）Some of students will have a book fair，they will sell old books．Some students will cut paper，and sell paper cuttings，others will make colourful paper flowers to sell．Our group are going to draw some cartoon characters and sell the pictures．（筹款活动）
I hope you can support us．【高分句型二】（希望获得支持）
Yours sincerely，
Ben．

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．