Question

写作（25分）

苏明是育才学校八年级的学生，他想写一封回信给他在美国的笔友Nancy，介绍他的学校生活。下面是一些要点，你能帮他写这封信吗？

1. 育才学校是一所混合学校。

2. 最喜欢的科目是历史。英语不太好，希望Nancy能帮他。

3.学校每学期有一个阅读周，同学们都很喜欢这个阅读周，可以读到图书馆的很多书。

4. 放学后打篮球，每周两次。

5. 喜欢育才学校的生活。

David Nancy,

I am very glad to receive your letter. You asked me about my school life in your letter. Now I’ll tell you something about it.

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Answer 1

One possible version：

David Nancy,

I am very glad to receive your letter. You asked me about my school life in your letter. Now I’ll tell you something about it.

Our school is called Yu Cai Middle School. It is a mixed school. My favorite subject is history. My English is poor. Can you help me with my English, Nancy? Our school has a reading week every term. We students like it very much. We can read a lot of books borrowed from the school library during the reading week. We play basketball twice a week after school. We like our school life very much.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，苏明写信给他的笔友介绍他的学校生活。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Our school is called……；My favorite subject is……；Can you……？We can……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.最后要表达对学校生活的喜爱。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头叙述写信的目的，接下来介绍自己的学校生活，像学校的名字、喜爱的科目、在学校的活动等，最后表达对学校的喜爱。此处用了be glad to , help with, a lot of, twice a week等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。