Question

【题目】在我们成长的道路，朋友是不可或缺的那道风景。在相知相伴的岁月里，留下了多少美好的故事和难忘的回忆! 某英语报社以“A Story Between My Friend and Me”为题开展征文活动，请你按要求用英语写一篇文章参赛。

要求：

1. 故事必须原创；

2. 80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考要点：

1. 分享故事(起因，经过，结果……)；

2. 表达感受(幸福，感动，思考……)；

3. ……

A Story Between My Friend and Me

There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me.

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Answer 1

【答案】There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me.

Here is the story. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly. My left leg was broken. So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study. Then my friend Mingming came to see me. When he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. On hearing this, I didn’t feel worried any more. From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with Mingming’s help. I thanked him a lot.

In my opinion, friends are very important in our life. No matter what happen, true friends will always be friends.

【解析】试题分析：本书面表达以“A Story Between My Friend and Me”为题，根据题目要求知道应该写一篇记叙文，同时必须完成相应的要点内容，作文的关键是回忆，因此它的基准时态应该以过去时态为主，即一、二要点，而第三点发表自己对朋友的看法或观点，应该用一般现在时来叙述。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中had a deep influence on, fell down, worried about, help me with my study，fall behind，in my opinion，no matter, and, so等词(组)的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如：宾语从句、时间状语从句、No matter引导的让步状语从句等，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。