Question

9．假如你是Han Mei，下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail，请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难．
提示词语：listen to，mother's love，care about，communicate with，
写作要求：1．语句通顺，书写工整；
2．可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥；
3．词数在60-80左右

Dear Han Mei，
I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently．My mother talks too much to me．She always tells me，"Be careful while crossing the street．""Put on more clothes．""Did you do a good job at school？"and so on．I'm annoyed（烦恼）．What shall I do？
Alice

Dear Alice，
As a teenager，I met the same problem as you．But now I can get along better with my mother．Here are some ideas for you．
Your mother talks much，because she cares aboutyou．Maybe it's not a good way，but it shows your mother's love．So I think you should listen toher．If your opinions are different from your mother's，you can communicate withher，and tell her what you are thinking about．
If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile．
I hope what I say here can help you a lot．
Yours，
Han Mei．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：Your mother talks much，because she cares about you你妈妈说话多，因为她在乎你．这是由because引导的原因状语从句；care about在意．
高分句型二：If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile如果你的妈妈不接受你的建议，保持沉默，给她一个微笑．这是由if引导的条件状语从句．

解答 Dear Alice，
As a teenager，I met the same problem as you．But now I can get along better with my mother．Here are some ideas for you．（开篇点题）
Your mother talks much，because she cares about you．（高分句型一）Maybe it's not a good way，but it shows your mother's love．So I think you should listen to her．If your opinions are different from your mother's，you can communicate with her，and tell her what you are thinking about．If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile．（高分句型二）（解决方法）
I hope what I say here can help you a lot．（表达期望）
Yours，
Han Mei

点评 （1）句型多样化，不要I（We）…到底，使人觉得乏味．（2）适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句．（3）进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句．（4）适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词．（5）偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感．