Question

4．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tony春节期间要来一个中国家庭做客．请你根据他来信所提出的问题，给他写一封邮件，告诉他北京的天气状况，中国春节的一些习俗，并就他在中国家庭的居住生活提出至少两条建议．
提示词语：cold，snow，the most important，try not to，don't，it's a good idea，must．

To：Tony
From：Li Hua
Subject：Visiting a Chinese family
Hi!Tony，
I'm very glad to know that you will visit Beijing．Now it is cold．Sometimes it snows，you can bring some warm clothes．
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China．There are some special traditions for you to follow．Try not to break anything．And don't clean your room on the first day．
When you visit a Chinese family，it is a good idea to bring a small gift．Usually Chinese people will give you a present in return．You must accept it with both hands．Remember to open it later．
I hope this helps and enjoy your stay in Beijing．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
There are some special traditions for you to follow．下面是你要遵循的一些特殊的传统． 这是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
 高分句型二
  When you visit a Chinese family，it is a good idea to bring a small gift．Usually Chinese people will give you a present in return．当你拜访一个中国家庭时，带一件小礼物是个好主意，通常中国人会送你一份礼物．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．

解答 To：Tony
From：Li Hua
Subject：Visiting a Chinese family
Hi!Tony，
I'm very glad to know that you will visit Beijing．Now it is cold．Sometimes it snows，you can bring some warm clothes．【要点一，介绍北京的天气】
The Spring  Festival is the most important festival in China．There are some special traditions for you to follow．【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】Try not to break anything．And don't clean your room on the first day．【要点二，介绍春节的传统】
When you visit a Chinese family，it is a good idea to bring a small gift．Usually Chinese people will give you a present in return【高分句型二，注意时间状语从句的使用】．You must accept it with both hands．Remember to open it later．【要点三，建议】
I hope this helps and enjoy your stay in Beijing．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．