Question

【题目】我们的外籍同学Linda写信给国内的朋友Mike，谈她在中国学校的生活。

学习	作息时间：8:00—17:15。有许多的课程。擅长汉语，最喜欢画画。
运动与活动	经常打篮球和游泳，每周都要参加舞蹈俱乐部。
饮食	在学校吃午餐，饮食健康，有米饭、蔬菜、鱼类和水果，口味很好。
节假日	与中国同学一起过年。（the Chinese New Year）
感受	…

要求：

1. 所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，适当发挥。

2. 文章不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

3. 语气通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整。

4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地点名。

Dear Mike,

I am in this new school for half a year. I would like to tell you something about my life here.

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Please write to me soon.

Yours,

Linda

Answer 1

【答案】Possible writing:

Dear Mike,

I am in this new school for half a year. I would like to tell you something about my life here.

My school starts at 8:30 a.m. and is over at 5:15 p.m.. I have many lessons. I am good at Chinese. and I like drawing best. I often play basketball after school and go to the Dancing Club every week. I have lunch at school. The food is healthy. I have rice, vegetables, fish and fruit. They taste very nice. I spend the Chinese New Year with my Chinese classmates. Life is interesting here. You will also like it if you come. Please write to me soon.

Yours,

Linda

【解析】

本文属于材料作文，要表达Linda在中国学校的生活。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如over, like...best, often, healthy以及interesting。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。