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3．近几年，家长开车接送孩子上下学已经普遍，人们对此看法各异，有些人认为接送孩子上学安全，可以让孩子有更多的休息时间，而且父母可以更好地和孩子沟通，而另一些人认为这会造成交通堵塞（traffic jams），特别是高峰期（rush hours），而且这样的会使孩子更多地依赖父母．
请陈述这些观点，并表明自己的看法．
注意：1语法正确，语意连贯，不要逐字翻译；280词左右．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数．
These years it's common that parents drive their children to school and back home．Different people have different ideas about that．
                                                                

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
They think ①②it's safer to send the kids to school in their car他们认为开车送孩子上学更安全．
①think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
②it is+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
【高分句型二】
Besides，it can make kids depend on parents too much．另外，它能让孩子过于依赖父母．
make sb do sth让某人做某事．

解答 These years it's common that parents drive their children to school and back home．Different people have different ideas about that．
Some people think it's good to drive their children to school．They think it's safer to send the kids to school in their car．【高分句型一】And children can also have more time to rest in the car or at home．Parents can communicate better with their kids．（赞同的人的意见）While others disagree．They think driving kids to school can cause traffic jams，especially in rush hours．Besides，it can make kids depend on parents too much．【高分句型二】（不赞同的人的意见）I think children should go to school by themselves．They can go on foot，by bike or by bus．It's good for both their health and environment．（我的看法）

点评 注意使用一些句型和短语，使整篇文章意思连贯、流畅，方能成就一篇好的作文．