题目内容
【题目】书面表达(共1小题,计20分)
每个人都有自己的爱好,请你谈谈自己的某个爱好,对自己的影响及对自己有什么帮助。80词以上。
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【答案】
My hobby
Hobbies may give us a lot of happiness. Everyone has their own hobbies. For example,playing computer games,playing basketball,keeping pets and so on. But my hobby is listening to music.
I love listening to music. I often listen to light music while I am doing my homework. I think listening to music makes boring things interesting. When I am in trouble,music can make me cheer up.When I am very tired,it can make me comfortable and help me relax. When I am angry with something,it also can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it’s good for my health.
I enjoy listening to music! Do you like listening to music? If not,I hope you can have a try,you’ll find it so good.
【解析】
试题分析:本题要求介绍自己的爱好,介绍自己爱好对自己的影响和帮助。要求习作者要能清楚地表述自己的观点和想法,写作时应注意要用正确的格式去写,会用一些短语,用一般现在时,以第一人称来叙述。
写作亮点:本文介绍自己的爱好:喜欢听音乐。第一段,用排比句列出了人们的一些爱好,然后直接点题,说出自己的爱好是听音乐。第二段,从人的不同时段来讲述听音乐给我带来的好处,同样运用排比手法,加强语气,增强语势。文章层层递进,第一段说我的爱好是听音乐;第二段说我爱听音乐;第三段说我享受着听音乐的乐趣。中心突出,重点突出。是一篇不错的英语习作。