Question

【题目】书面表达

根据以下要点，以“In the zoo”为题写篇短文。

要点：1.和谁，怎么去？

2.看到什么动物？

3.动物怎么样？

Answer 1

【答案】In the zoo

Today is Sunday.My parents and I go to the zoo by car. It is a beautiful sunny day.We see lots of animals，like pandas，dolphins，seals, tigers，lions, elephants，monkeys，snakes，and so on.I like pandas very much.They are very cute.The dolphins and the seals are very friendly.The monkeys are very clever.I’m afraid of the tigers and the lions. I don’t like snakes at all.The elephants are very big.But they are very cute，too.I have a great time in the zoo.

【解析】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如go to the zoo，by car，lots of animals，and so on，very much，be afraid of，at all，have a great time，in the zoo等。同时My parents and I go to the zoo by car.和The dolphins and the seals are very friendly.并列主语的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。