Question

11．难忘的初中生活即将结束，三年来你成长了，进步了，收获了．请根据下列提示准备一份80词的发言稿，稿件的开头、结尾已给出．

以前	易怒，喜欢和人争论．
现在	将大部分的精力投入到学习中，在学习上已经取得 了很大的进步．能很耐心的辅导同学的作业．加入Helping Hands Club已有两年．经常为贫困地区的儿童募集书本．
愿望	…

注意：发言稿中必须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯．
你的愿望需要用2至3句话作适当发挥．词数80个左右，发言稿开头已经给出，不计入总词数．发言稿中不准出现真实校名和姓名．
Dear teachers and friends，
How time flies!I'm happy to be here to share my happiness and progress with you．I used to get angry easily and liked to argue with others．Now I put most of my effort into my study．So I have made great progress in my study．I am patient enough to help my classmates with their homework．I have been in Helping Hands Club for two years．I often raise some books for the children in poor areas．I want to enter No.1 High School this year．I hope my dream can come true．
That's all for my speech．Thank you for listening．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是说说自己三年的变化和对未来的展望．时态主要为一般现在时、一般过去时、一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．以前；易怒，喜欢和人争论．
2．现在；将大部分的精力投入到学习中，在学习上已经取得了很大的进步．能很耐心的辅导同学的作业．加入Helping Hands Club已有两年．经常为贫困地区的儿童募集书本．
3．愿望…

常用到的重点短语：
used to do sth 过去常常
put effort into  把精力投入
make progress 进步
help sb with sth 让某人做某事
【高分句型】
1．I ①used to get angry easily and liked to ②argue with others．
①used to do sth 过去常常
②argue with sb  与某人争论
2．I am ①patient enough to ②help my classmates with their homework．
①adj+enough to do sth 足够怎么样去做某事
②help sb with sth 让某人做某事
3．I hope my dream can come true．
hope后是省略了that的宾语从句．

解答 Dear teachers and friends，
How time flies!I'm happy to be here to share my happiness and progress with you．I used to get angry easily and liked to argue with others．【高分句型】（易怒，喜欢和人争论）Now I put most of my effort into my study．So I have made great progress in my study．（将大部分的精力投入到学习中，在学习上已经取得了很大的进步）I am patient enough to help my classmates with their homework．【高分句型】（能很耐心的辅导同学的作业）I have been in Helping Hands Club for two years．I often raise some books for the children in poor areas．（加入Helping Hands Club已有两年．经常为贫困地区的儿童募集书本）I want to enter No.1 High School this year．I hope my dream can come true【高分句型】．（愿望）
That's all for my speech．Thank you for listening．

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全．动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题．写作中注意将以前的自己和现在的自己介绍清楚，并介绍一下自己的愿望．根据材料内容可知本文涉及过去现在和将来三种时态的表达，注意时态和主谓一致等问题．写作中注意使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．