Question

1．李克强总理将"全民阅读"写入了《政府工作报告》，倡导全民热爱阅读．请根据提示用英文向English Post投稿，简述阅读现状及你对阅读的看法和打算．

阅读现状	一些国人不常阅读；有些人声称没空，有些人认为没用．
你的看法	阅读很重要，因为…（至少两点）
你的打算	…（至少两点）

要求：1．词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数．
2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范．
3．文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和校名．
Premier Li Keqiang has put the National Reading in his government work report to encourage a love of reading in all Chinese people．
However，some Chinese people seldom read in their spare time．Some say that they are too busy to do some reading，others think that it's useless to read．
But I think reading is very important in our life．We can get knowledge from reading．It can not only open our minds but also make us more intelligent．Besides，reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English．
I'm planning to read at least 5 books in the coming holiday．And I'll spend more time reading every day in my senior high school life．Reading makes a full man!Let's start reading now．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是谈谈简述阅读现状及你对阅读的看法和打算．时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1阅读现状：一些国人不常阅读；有些人声称没空，有些人认为没用．
2你的看法
3你的打算
常用到的重点短语：
not only …but also…不仅…而不能…
make sb+adj让某人怎样
too…to do sth 太…去做某事
at least最少

【高分句型】
1．①Some say②that they are③too busy to do some reading，others think④that it's useless ⑤to read．
①some…others…一些…另一些…
②that引导的宾语从句，作为say的宾语．
③too…to do sth 太…而不能…
④that引导的宾语从句，作为think的宾语．
⑤动词不定式做真正主语，it是形式主语．
2．It can ①not only open our minds but also ②make us more intelligent．
①not only …but also…不仅…而且…连接两个并列成分．
②make sb+adj让某人怎样
3．①Besides，②reading is also ③one of the most important ways ④to learn a foreign language ⑤like English．
①besides 另外，引出下一观点．
②动名词reading做主语，谓语动词用单数is．
③one of+the+最高级+名词复数，表示最怎么样的…之一．
④动词不定式做后置定语，修饰前面的ways．
⑤like表示例如，给出例子．

解答 Premier Li Keqiang has put the National Reading in his government work report to encourage a love of reading in all Chinese people．
However，some Chinese people seldom read in their spare time．Some say that they are too busy to do some reading，others think that it's useless to read．【高分句型】（阅读现状）
But I think reading is very important in our life．We can get knowledge from reading．It can not only open our minds but also make us more intelligent．【高分句型】Besides，reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English．【高分句型】（我的看法）       
I'm planning to read at least 5 books in the coming holiday．And I'll spend more time reading every day in my senior high school life．Reading makes a full man!Let's start reading now．（我的打算）

点评 初中英语的作文，着重考察学生连词成句的能力，要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在对所出现的问题或是采取的措施描写中注意使用连词或是好的句式．对于中学作文的写作，尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中，写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章，不要出现中式英文．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文．