Question

10月19日是一个晴朗的星期天。假设你们班参观了海洋公园。根据下面表格的内容写一篇60词左右的日记。可适当发挥。

要求：1.短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，并可适当发挥；

2.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、校名和地名。

What to do

Visit the Ocean Park

 

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Answer 1

Today our class visited the Ocean park in our city. In the morning, we first saw a wonderful dolphin show. The dolphins were really clever and cute.Then, we watched some sharks. After that, we had our lunch there. In the afternoon. We hung out in the park. Some of us took photos. Others bought some souvenirs in the gift shop. Finally, we went home. All of us enjoyed ourselves there.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇日记，记叙了我们班参观公园的场景。按参观的时间顺序，根据所给的五点提示展开 写作，要点要全，并有适当发挥。注意句与句之间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】作文中运用了不少短语，使作文出彩，如： a wonderful dolphin show；hung out ；some…others…；enjoyed ourselves 等。文中也有适当的发挥，如：The dolphins were really clever and cute.We hung out in the park. All of us enjoyed ourselves there.等，避免文章千篇一律。

考点：图表作文。