Question

8．假如你叫张华，你的美国好朋友Jack想简单地了解一下宿迁．请根据下列提示写一篇80词左右的短文，向他介绍宿迁的风采．

环境优美	到处都是花草树木；公共场所干净整洁…
举止文明	人人遵守交通规则；不乱扔垃圾…
绿色出行	尽量步行、骑车或乘公共汽车…
空闲时间	锻炼、阅读、旅游…

注意：
1．短文要点必须齐全，可作适当发挥；
2．书写规范，表达清楚，语意连贯；
3．短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jack，
Glad to receive your e-mail．Let me tell you something about Suqian．There are all kinds of trees and flowers everywhere．The environment is beautiful．The air is fresh and clean．People behave well in public．Everyone obeys traffic rules．And they never drop litter here and there．They all know it's important to protect the environment．So when they go out，they always try to walk，ride bikes or take a bus．Also，they have different activities to do in their free time，such as reading，exercising，travelling and so on．
In a word，Suqian is becoming more and more beautiful．
I hope you can come and see it for yourself this summer holiday．
Yours
Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
There are all kinds of trees and flowers everywhere．到处都是各种各样的树和花．这是there be句型，表示某地有某物．
    高分句型二
  So when they go out，they always try to walk，ride bikes or take a bus．   所以当他们出去的时候，他们总是试着走路，骑自行车或坐公共汽车．  这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．

解答 Dear Jack，
Glad to receive your e-mail．Let me tell you something about Suqian． There are all kinds of trees and flowers everywhere【高分句型一，注意时间状语从句there be句型的使用】．The environment is beautiful．The air is fresh and clean【要点一，环境优美】．People behave well in public．Everyone obeys traffic rules．And they never drop litter here and there．They all know it's important to protect the environment【要点二，举止文明】．So when they go out，they always try to walk，ride bikes or take a bus【高分句型二，注意时间状语从句的使用】．【要点三，绿色出行】Also，they have different activities to do in their free time，such as reading，exercising，travelling and so on．【要点四，空闲时间】
In a word，Suqian is becoming more and more beautiful．
I hope you can come and see it for yourself this summer holiday．
Yours
Zhang Hua

点评 动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．