题目内容

【题目】书面表达。

你最喜欢的季节是什么呢?请你结合下面的提示,写一篇80词左右的短文。

要求:1.覆盖所有要点;2.语言流畅,结构合理。

要点:1. Which is your favorite season?

2. When is the season?

3. What is the weather like then?

4. What does your school look like then?

5. What activities do people enjoy doing in this season?

【答案】

My favorite season is spring. It is from March to May. When spring comes, the weather gets warmer and everything begins to grow. Trees turn green and many flowers come out. My school is full of green life and beautiful flowers. In Spring I like to go hiking. I like to feel close to nature and enjoy the beautiful spring scenery. And when there is enough wind, I like to fly kites with my buddies.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,介绍自己最喜欢的季节。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态。结合要点提示,我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。写作时,我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行重新整理和安排,使文章的意思衔接更自然。语言更流畅,结构更合理。

写作亮点::这是一篇非常优秀的作文,短文中作者按照题目的要求,结合要点提示,把自己最喜欢是季节表述出来,结构清晰,要点全面。语言美如画。而且作者在写作时,并不是完全按照题目中给出的顺序,逐句翻译的,而是将这些信息进行了整合,让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达,这一点很好。短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范,而且作者还使用了一些较好的句式,增强了文章的连贯性。

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