Question

【题目】【云南省2015年中考英语试题】书面表达（满分10分）

Growing up with …

提示：在你的成长过程中，一定有人陪伴你、帮助你、影响你、感动你，让你能够健康快乐地成长。请以“Growing up with…”为题，用英语写一篇短文。

要求：1. 请把题目补充完整；

2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

4. 将短文写在答题卡上。写在本试题卷上无效。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Growing up with my father

My father always loves me and tries to help me.

When I was seven years old, I started my primary school. I had to get up early and did homework every day. I was so tired that I didn’t like to go to school. Then my father told me a lot of stories on my way to school, and helped me to plan my time. Day by day, I knew the importance of learning, and became interested in reading books.

No matter what difficulties I meet, my father is by my side. I am sure I will grow up better with my father.

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求以“Growing up with…”为题作文，首先一定要把题目补充完整。短文重点写与某某一起成长，要言之有物，言之有事，可以通过讲述这个人如果陪伴你、帮助你、影响你、感动你、激励你成长的故事，来突出主题。讲述这个人如何“陪伴你、帮助你、影响你、感动你”可以用一般现在时态，如果是具体的事例，就要用一般过去时态。从人称上看，本题是第一人称和第三人称形式。

写作亮点：第一段只有一句话，开门见山，直奔主题：父亲一直爱我，一直尽力帮助我；第二段通过讲述父亲如何帮助我明确读书的目的和重要性的故事，具体说明了父亲怎样伴我成长；第三段进一步明确短文主题：无论我遇到什么困难，父亲都在我的身边。我相信在父亲的陪伴下我会成长得更好。短文脉络清晰，重点突出，中心突出。文中用得较好的句型、词组有：so…that…；day by day, the importance of；become interested in；no matter；等等。