Question

17．去年暑假你是在那里度过的呢？是外出度假还是待在家里？都做了些什么呢？请以My Last Summer Vacation为题写一篇短文，描述你去年的暑假生活，80-100词．
要求：条理清楚，语言流畅，语法正确，内容充实．
文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
The sea water was as blue as the sky，and it was very clean as well．海水像天空一样蓝，而且它也非常干净．
as…as 像…一样
as well 也
句型二：
When I was swimming in the sea，as if I was a little fish．当我在海里游泳的时候，好像我是一条小鱼．
when引导的时间状语从句
as if 好像
in the sea在海里

解答 Last year，I have spent a happy summer holiday．During the holiday，I went to Dalian for a visit，there I saw the beautiful sea，it was really amazing．（暑假期间所见到的事） The sea water was as blue as the sky，and it was very clean as well．【高分句型一】Also，the beach in Dalian was very nice，we built a small sand palace．When I was swimming in the sea，as if I was a little fish．【高分句型二】（所做的事） I like that feeling very much．That's my trip to Dalian，it's really unforgettable．I had a great time．This year，I want to Guilin．（今年暑假的打算）

点评 写作主要考查学生综合运用英语语言的能力，涉及学生的词汇量，正确运用单词的能力，对所学语法的掌握程度，能否按照英语习惯正确表达所要表达的意思的能力等等．