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17．下列5幅图画告诉了我们中学生小明在课堂内外是如何对待英语学习的．请你根据这5幅图画，以"How Xiao Ming Studies English"为题对小明的表现进行描述．说明这些表现对他学习英语带来的不良后果，并对英语学习的态度发表自己的看法．

要求：1．语言准确得当，条理清晰．
2．写作内容要包括所有图画中的主要内容和文字提示中的必要内容．
3．词数：80〜100（短文的题目和开头已给出，且不计入总词数）．
4．词语提示：复习review；考试成绩差get bad marks
How Xiao Ming Studies English
Xiao Ming is a middle school student…At home，he usually watches TV till late night and doesn't review his English lessons．In English class，he often talks with his classmates and doesn't listen to his English teacher carefully．When the teacher asks the class to speak English，he usually speaks Chinese．While he is doing his English homework，he's always thinking of playing computer games．Because of what he does with his English，he always gets bad/low/few marks in English exams．From Xiao Ming's story we know that we must be anxious about English．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
①When the teacher a②sks the class to speak English，he usually speaks Chinese．当老师要求班上讲英语时，他通常会说中文．
①when引导的时间状语从句
②ask sb to do sth要求某人做某事
高分句型二：
From Xiao Ming's story we know ①that we must ②be anxious about English．从小明的故事，我们知道，我们必须对英语充满渴望．
①that引导的宾语从句作know的宾语
②be anxious about渴望…

解答 How Xiao Ming Studies English
Xiao Ming is a middle school student．At home，he usually watches TV till late night and doesn't review his English lessons．In English class，he often talks with his classmates and doesn't listen to his English teacher carefully．When the teacher asks the class to speak English，he usually speaks Chinese．【高分句型一】While he is doing his English homework，he's always thinking of playing computer games．Because of what he does with his English，he always gets bad/low/few marks in English exams．【种种表现对他学习英语带来的不良后果】From Xiao Ming's story we know that we must be anxious about English．【高分句型二】【对英语学习态度的自己的看法】

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