Question

【题目】情景作文

假如你是Martin，你的笔友Alice在给你的来信中说她经常生病，情绪低落。请你给她写封回信，告诉她应该怎样做。

参考词汇: healthy food, do more exercise, enough sleep, keep happy, talk about your problems.

要求：1. 根据参考词汇，并适当发挥；

2. 字数不少于60词，注意字迹工整。

Dear Alice,

I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well and feel unhappy. I can give you some advice.

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Yours,

Martin

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Alice,

I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well and feel unhappy. I can give you some advice. I hope this will be helpful for you. I think healthy food and exercise is the key to good health. Therefore, you should have food including fresh vegetables, fruits instead of food high in fat and sugar. Doing more exercise is also necessary for us to build up our body. You can run, swim, play table tennis and so on. Besides, enough sleep is good for your health, which makes you full of energy and in a good mood. Last but not the least, you should keep happy.

Follow my advice, I believe, you will feel better soon. Best wishes to you.

Yours,

Martin

【解析】

试题分析：本题是给笔友的一封回信，要注意书信的基本格式、语言选择；这封回信的内容是给朋友提建议，要对朋友的处境表示理解、同情，同时给她提一些好的建议。提建议要注意句子的语气，多用一些情态动词，尽量不要用祈使句。

写作亮点：本范文以I’m sorry to hear…开头，对朋友的处境表示同情，抓住对方的心，为下文作好铺垫，使得建议容易被对方接受。接下来，用I hope, I think, you should, you can等等引出提建议的句子，语言中肯、语气委婉。其中用到的宾语从句，动名词作主语等等，使短文更加具体生动。最后一段，希望朋友接受建议，祝愿朋友好起来。水到渠成，自然收尾。