Question

3．根据要求完成大作文，80词左右．
2013年，第十二届全运会将在辽宁召开．目前"全民健身，阳光行动"的理念使学校出现了可喜的变化：每天运动时间延长了，运动项目增加了，学生体质增强了，校园生活丰富了．请以"Sports in Our School"为题给写一篇报道．
要点：1．time for sports                       
2．kinds of sports
3．change of students'health and study      
4．change of school life
要求：（1）内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译
（2）不得透露考生姓名、学校等信息．
Sports in Our School

As we know，The Twelfth National Athletic Meet will be held in Liaoning，so the idea that"sports for all，sunshine action"has made a big difference to our school．
Great changes have taken place in our school，for example，ithas takenstudents more time to exercise，which is a good change．Besides，there have been more kinds of sports in our school，like football，basketball，tennis，ping-pong and so on．What's more，student's body quility has improved a lot，they are healthier and healthier．It's also a good way to improve their study．Because of spending time doing sports，student's school life is getting richer and richer．
From all the above you can see，sports in our school has changeda lot．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇记叙文，让我们结合题目要求，适当增加内容，从四个方面对我们学校的运动的变化做一个描述，由题目要求可确定主要时态为现在完成时，强调"全民健身，阳光行动"这个理念对学校的运动产生的影响，全文分三个部分，第一个部分总的介词这个理念对我们学校的运动的变化产生了影响；第二个部分描述具体的影响；第三个部分总结我们学校的运动发生生变化．
重要的短语和句型：
1．as sb know 如某人所知
2．make a difference 起作用，有影响
3．take place 发生，举行
4．it has taken sb time to do sth 某人花时间做某事
5．there be句型 有
6．because of 因为
高分句型：
1．for example，it has taken students more time to exercise，which is a good change
比如，学生花更多的时间锻炼，这是一个好的变化．
for example 比如；it has taken sb time to do sth 某人花时间做了某事，it作形式主语，不定式是真正的主语；which引导非限制性定语从句．
2．What's more，student's body quility has improved a lot，they are healthier and healthier．
而且，学生的身体素质提高了，他们越来越健康．
What's more 而且；a lot 许多；比较级+and+比较级 越来越…
3．Because of spending time doing sports，student's school life is getting richer and richer．
由于花更多的时间做运动，学生的学校生活越来越丰富．
because of 因为；spend time doing sth 花时间做某事；get+比较级+and+比较级 变得越来越…

解答 Sports in Our School
    As we know，The Twelfth National Athletic Meet will be held in Liaoning，so the idea that"sports for all，sunshine action"has made a big difference to our school．（总要概括理念对学校运动产生了影响）
    Great changes have taken place in our school，for example，it has taken students more time to exercise，which is a good change．【高分句型1】Besides，there have been more kinds of sports in our school，like football，basketball，tennis，ping-pong and so on．What's more，student's body quility has improved a lot，they are healthier and healthier．【高分句型2】It's also a good way to improve their study．Because of spending time doing sports，student's school life is getting richer and richer．【高分句型3】（具体介绍各种变化）
    From all the above you can see，sports in our school has changed a lot．（总结学校运动发生了变化）

点评 作文类题考查学生平时词汇量与表达法的积累，这篇作文要根据题目要求，结合生活实际适当地增加内容，如运动时间延长的好处，运动项目具体增加了哪些等，还要注意一些连接词的使用，如besides，what's more，这样会显得文章更连贯，最后要检查一遍，看是否有错的单词或表达．