Question

作文（计10分）

人生最美丽的回忆就是你与他人的友谊。同学们，你是否也有很多志同道合的好朋友呢？请选择一位你初中阶段最好的朋友，说说你们的相同点，以及你们的不同点。

要求：1.内容包括：①你与好朋友的相同点。②你与好朋友在外貌、性格和兴趣三个方面的不同点。

2.词数：60-80词

3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校名和地名。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My Best Friend

Han Mei is my best friend. We know each other since we were born. Because we are twins. She is my elder sisiter. Like most twin sisters, we look almost the same. The most easy way to distinguish us is that she has a scar on her arm. It is my fault. When we are six years old, we played beside the stair, and then I pushed her down the stair accidently. She got hurt but not blame me at all. That is the history of her scar. Since then our parents always recognize us with that mark. Han Mei is better than me in study. So, sometimes I was criticized by our mother for failing the exam, she will pretend me to receive the criticism, without making my mother see the mark. I’ m so thankful for this. So sometimes I will pretend her to take part in the piano class, as she is not interested in it. It is so interesting to play such game.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一片说明文，介绍自己的译为朋友，要求说明你们之间的相似点，不同之处，文章应该从两个部分说明，一是相似之处，二是不同之处。注意文章的连贯性。

【亮点说明】文章鲜明的介绍了我的双胞胎姐妹也是我的最好的朋友，文中运用表语从句The most easy way to distinguish us is that she has a scar on her arm.，非谓语动词结构she will pretend me to receive the criticism, without making my mother see the mark.，使得文章不再枯燥的是简单句的罗列。

考点：提纲作文。