Question

16．假设今天是三月五日，星期六，天气晴．你班级组织"学雷锋，做好事"活动．你和同学们7：30在学校门口集中，然后分头去清洁公园、养老院看望老人、医院看望生病的小孩．请据此写一篇80词左右的日记．注意日记的格式和时态，用上所给的提示词，可以适当发挥．

Saturday，March 5^th Sunny
It was fine today．My classmates and I met at the school gate at 7：30．We are divided into three groups．Some helped clean up the park．Some went to the old People's home to visit the old people．They played chess with them and performed a play for them．I went to visit the sick children in the hospital with four of my classmates．We sang songs for them and told them some stories to cheer them up．I felt very happy because I could help others．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是结合图画将你和同学们一起学雷锋的一天写成日记，注意日记的格式．时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．见面时间地点：7：30在学校门口
2．活动内容；分成三组：①清洁公园、②养老院看望老人、下象棋和表演话剧，③医院看望生病的小孩，唱歌和讲故事，使他们高兴起来
3．我的感受
常用到的重点短语：
divide into 分成…
play chess 下棋
cheer up 兴奋

【高分句型】
1．We①are ②divided into three groups．
①一般现在时的被动语态am/is/are+过去分词
②divide into  分成…
2．We sang songs for them and told them some stories ①to ②cheer them up．
①动词不定式做目的状语．
②cheer up 使兴奋，代词放中间
3．I felt very happy because I could help others．
这是because引导的原因状语从句．

解答 Saturday，March 5^th     Sunny
It was fine today．My classmates and I met at the school gate at 7：30．（见面时间地点）We are divided into three groups．【高分句型】Some helped clean up the park．Some went to the old People's home to visit the old people．They played chess with them and performed a play for them．I went to visit the sick children in the hospital with four of my classmates．We sang songs for them and told them some stories to cheer them up．【高分句型】（活动内容）I felt very happy because I could help others．【高分句型】（我的感受）

点评 在写书面表达是首先要注意的问题就是人称，不能混淆人称；其次，应注意动词的英语，根据不同的人称确定动词的形式；再次，句型应该符合英语的表达习惯；最后，用自己熟练掌握的句型造句．