Question

【题目】书面表达

假定你是李华，你的英国笔友正在写一篇关于各国中学生课外阅读(extra-curricular reading)情况的调查报告，他给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解相关情况。请你根据以下提示，给他回一封电子邮件。

注意：1.根据所给提示，适当发挥，你的思考至少要有两点。

2.字数不少于100。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3.邮件中不得提及所在学校及本人姓名。

Dear Helen,

Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Helen,

Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extra-curricular reading in our school. In fact, most of the students in our school haven't realized the importance of reading, especially extra-curricular reading. Therefore, the time and energy devoted to reading are very little. Besides, some students prefer to read comic books, magazines and newspapers rather than classic reading materials.

I think there are some reasons for this. First of all, quite a lot of students are busy with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a good habit of reading. They would rather spend time on TVs or computer games instead.

However, reading is obviously helpful to both our life and study, which can not only improve our knowledge but enrich our life as well. So it is quite necessary for us students to take up reading and for teachers to reduce homework so that we can have more time to read.

Best Wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求写一篇关于中学生课外阅读情况的调查报告。可以从本校学生的阅读情况入手，介绍每天阅读时间，一个月的阅读量等等。分析造成这种现关的原因：学习的时间太长，留给阅读的时间不够。在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，写作较为灵活，能较好地发挥想象能力和英语语言表达能力。首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在选择句式时要赋予变化。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采。短文用一般现在时态，主要用第一人称进行表达。

写作亮点：本范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子： as a result因此, prefer to do… rather than do…宁愿做……而不愿……，be burdened with负担， form a habit of 形成……，the time and energy students devoted to reading are very limited.这句话用了定语从句， So it is quite necessary for the students to take up reading and for the teachers to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. 这句话用了it做形式主语和so that句型还有范文使用了Besides, First of all, However,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。