题目内容
2.今年我市深入开展了"学习雷锋精神,共创文明城区"的活动.在3月5日学雷锋纪念日这天,你校组织志愿者去广安敬老院开展"学雷锋,送温暖"活动.假如你是广安七中学生张华,请你将活动情况介绍给美国朋友Ben,与他分享你的美好经历.(活动内容见下表)| 活动时间 | 3月5日 |
| 活动地点 | 广安敬老院(Guang'an Nursing Home) |
| 参加人员 | 学校志愿者(volunteer) |
| 活动形式 | 1送去鲜花和水果 2帮助打扫卫生 3陪老人聊天(chat with sb)、唱歌、跳舞 4送去美好祝愿 5… |
| 活动感想 | 关爱(care for)老人(the elderly people),尊重(respect)老人 |
1.短文应包括表中所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
3.文章不低于80词.开头、结尾已给出.
Dear Ben,
Thank you for your last e-mail.Let me tell you what we did on 5th March in our school.
As soon as we volunteers got to Guang'an Nursing Home,they gave us a warm welcome.We brought some flowers and fruits to the elderly people.We cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them.Then we sang and danced.How happy we were!After that,we sat together chatting with each other and gave our best wishes to them.The elderly people were very excited.When it was time for us volunteers to leave,they were grateful for our kindness.But I felt it our duty to care for the elderly people and respect them.
If you have the chance in China,I hope you can join us.
Yours,
Zhang Hua.
分析 这是一篇提纲作文.内容是将"学雷锋,送温暖"活动情况介绍给美国朋友Ben,与他分享你的美好经历.时态主要为一般过去时.人称主要为第一人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1活动时间:3月5日
2活动地点:广安敬老院(Guang'an Nursing Home)
3参加人员:学校志愿者
4活动形式:送去鲜花和水果;帮助打扫卫生;陪老人聊天(chat with sb)、唱歌、跳舞;送去美好祝愿…
5活动感想:关爱老人,尊重老人
常用到的重点短语:
get to 到达
chat with sb 与某人聊天
give one's best wishes to sb 给某人最好的祝愿
it is time for sb to do sth某人做某事的时间到了
care for 关爱
高分句型:
1.①As soon as we ②volunteers got to Guang'an Nursing Home,they gave us a warm welcome.
①as soon as一…就…,引导时间状语从句.
②volunteers作为主语同位语.
2.①But I felt ②③it our duty to ④care for the elderly people and respect them.
①but表转折,引出不同的观点.
②省略了that的宾语从句,作为feel的宾语.
③it是形式宾语,动词不定式是真正宾语
④care for sb 关爱某人
解答 Dear Ben,
Thank you for your last e-mail.Let me tell you what we did on 5th March in our school.(活动时间)
As soon as we volunteers got to Guang'an Nursing Home,they gave us a warm welcome(高分句型)(地点.人员).We brought some flowers and fruits to the elderly people.We cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them.Then we sang and danced.How happy we were!After that,we sat together chatting with each other and gave our best wishes to them.The elderly people were very excited.When it was time for us volunteers to leave,they were grateful for our kindness.(活动形式)But I felt it our duty to care for the elderly people and respect them.(高分句型)(活动感想)
If you have the chance in China,I hope you can join us.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
点评 图表类作文写作之前考生首先要认真审题,确定文章的中心.表格内容要全部包括在作文中,词数要符合要求.句式表达要正确,注意句子的主谓宾、主系表等结构.文章结构要清晰.考生在平时的英语学习中需牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理,也可为文章增色不少.
--I am not sure.Maybe it's 100yuan.( )
| A. | cover | B. | size | C. | color | D. | price |
| A. | /; a | B. | a;/ | C. | /;/ | D. | a; a |