Question

【题目】写作

假设你叫李俊，你的美国朋友David想要在中国结交更多的朋友。你通过电子邮件，把你的最好的朋友王明介绍给他。王明情况见下表：

姓名	王明
年龄	15
外貌	方脸，大眼睛，短发，高个子；
个性	诚实，幽默，替朋友保守秘密，从不说他人坏话；
爱好	痴迷于DIY, 上周给我做了一张生日卡片；
其他情况	1、对了解不同种类的鸟类感兴趣，是观鸟协会的一员； 2、最喜欢冬季，因为他喜欢堆雪人，打雪仗；
理想	嗓音好，喜欢唱歌，长大后想成为一名歌手；

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下连贯；

2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；

3）词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

4）不使用真实姓名和校名等。

Dear David,

How are you? I’m writing to introduce my best friend Wang Ming to you.

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I hope you can make friends with him as soon as you can. Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival.

Best wishes,

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

How are you? I’m writing to introduce my best friend Wang Ming to you.

He is 15 years old. He is tall with two big eyes. He is tall and has short hair.

Wang Ming has a good sense of humor. He often tells us funny stories and makes us happy. He is also an honest boy and he can keep secrets for his friends. He never says a bad word about others.

He is crazy about DIY. It was my birthday last week. He made a birthday card for me. He is interested in learning about different kinds of birds and now he is a member of the Bird watching Society. Among/Of the four seasons, he likes winter best because he likes making snowmen and having snowball fights with his friends.

He has a good voice and is good at singing. So he wants to be a singer when he grows up.

I hope you can make friends with him as soon as you can. Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival.

Best wishes,

【解析】这是一篇话题作文，作文题目已经给出，而且列出了要求。写作文时要仔细审题，每一条都要写到，注意前后句的连接，不要遗漏要点，必要时可适当发挥。本文时态主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

文章主要写介绍王明，要点全部都写出，并且增加了一些内容使文章更通顺，更符合要求。文中使用很多短语，让文章更加出彩，如with two big eyes.，keep secrets，says a bad word about others , is interested in，taking trains”等。在平时的学习中，要注意点滴积累，这样在写作文时才能灵活运用。