Question

随着人口的增长和家庭轿车的普及，交通安全问题已成为千家万户关注的焦点。作为初中生你是怎样上学的呢？是乘公交车、小汽车还是自行车？请根据提示词发挥想象以the advantage of the bicycle为题写一篇60-80词短文，开头已给出（7分）

提示词：save energy, cause air pollution, park bikes, cost little, a useful sport, be good for health

The bicycle is one of the most important vehicles in the world. In every country people use bicycles for work, for sport or just for fun. As a student, we like going to school by bike. Why is it so popular? ____________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

The Advantage Of The Bicycle

The bicycle is one of the most important vehicles in the world. In every country people use bicycles for work, for sport or just for fun. As a student, we like going to school by bike. Why is it so popular? First, it can help us save energy. Second, it doesn’t cause air pollution. Third, it’s easy to park bikes . Fourth, it costs little. Then, it’s a useful sport. Finally, it’s good for health. So bicycles are becoming more and more popular all over the world.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇根据所给要求写一篇语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范的作文。这就要求仔细分析所给要求，然后考虑清楚写作思路。细节方面就要注意时态，语法以及衔接词的运用等。

【亮点说明】这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把要求的内容叙述清楚，做到了首尾呼应，是一篇不错的文章。

考点：命题式作文