题目内容
【题目】一首《时间都去哪儿了》的歌曲曾经引发很多人的思考和热议。某英文网站也对此问题在初三学生中做了调查,请根据调查结果,以“Our Spare Time”为题写一篇英文报道向该网站投稿,并谈谈自己的看法和建议,可根据表内信息进行适当发挥。80词左右.
Free time activities | Why? | |
most students | do homework; | top students enter a good senior high school |
a few students say | play online games play on QQ. | not interested in any subjects |
in my spare time and my advice | … | … |
要求:1)文章须包含所给要点,并阐述自己的看法;
2)文中不能出现真实的校名、班级和人名;
Our Spare Time
Recently, the website has made a surveyabout “Where has your spare time gone?”. Here is the result.
【答案】Our Spare Time
Recently, the website has made a survey about “Where has your spare time gone?”. Here is the result. Most students think they spend almost all the time doing their homework and taking after-school classes. That's because their parents want them to be top students, and they themselves also want to enter a good senior high school next year. Few students say they usually play online games and chat with friends on QQ. They are not interested in any subjects, and they don't want to do homework. As for me, I help my parents with some housework after finishing my school work every day. I think it is also a good idea to spend some time doing sports.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点,并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来,并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不要遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写,要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。这篇短文多次使用连接词and,还使用了一些主从复合句如That's because their parents want them to be top students,I think it is also a good idea to spend some time doing sports等等为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。