Question

8．人人都希望生活在环境优美的城市中，作为中学生，我们要积极为创建"文明城市"作贡献．请你根据下列图表所给提示词写一篇发言稿． 
要求：（1）语句通顺，书写规范，文章 中不得出现真实姓名和校名．
（2）必须运用所有提示词，并写出两个以上自己的观点．
（3）词数在 80 词左右
 Civilized（文明）City 

good behavior		excellent environment
should	don't	can	had better not
talk politely	traffic rules	plant	your ideas
be friendly to		pick up litter
	loudly
help		clean the small ads

Everybody likes to live in a beautiful and civilized city．We hope that our city will become a civilized city．We know it includes good behavior and excellent environment．So I want everyone can do something for it To good behavior，we should be friendly to others，talk with other people politely and help some people in trouble．Please don't break the traffic rules or talk loudly in public．To excellent environment，I think we can plant trees，pick up the litter and clean the small ads on the wall．You'd better not waste water or walk on the grassland．
Thank you for your support．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．根据方框所给的内容写作文．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
高分句型（一）．To good behavior，we should be friendly to others，talk with other people politely and help some people in trouble 在良好行为上，我们应该贵他人友善，和他人礼貌地说话以及帮助困难中的人们．（be friendly to…对…友善； in trouble，处在困境中）
高分句型（二）．You'd better not waste water or walk on the grassland．你最好不要浪费水喝在草坪上走．（had better （not）do sth．最好做…，其后接动词原形．）

解答 Everybody likes to live in a beautiful and civilized city．We hope that our city will become a civilized city．We know it includes good behavior and excellent environment．So I want everyone can do something for it．（提出自己的观点） To good behavior，we should be friendly to others，talk with other people politely and help some people in trouble．（高分句型一）Please don't break the traffic rules or talk loudly in public．To excellent environment，I think we can plant trees，pick up the litter and clean the small ads on the wall．（分别从良好的行为和好的环境两个方面阐述）You'd better not waste water or walk on the grassland．（高分句型二）
    Thank you for your support．（最后对听众表示感谢）

点评 考生在写作时需明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，考生在平时应多注意常考的作文形式，积累相关的短语和词汇