Question

【题目】赠人玫瑰，手有余香；帮助别人，快乐自己。你一定体验过帮助别人之后心里的那份幸福，请以“ Helping Others”为题，用英语写一篇短文和我们分享帮助别人之后的快乐。

提示：1. 短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；

2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；

3. 词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词。

Helping Others

As the saying goes, “Roses given, fragrance in hand.”_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】As the saying goes, “Roses given, fragrance in hand.” In the daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble. So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble.

My classmate Jason was ill last week. He had to be in hospital, so I tried my best to help him. Yesterday was Saturday, my classmates and I went to see him together. I thought we should get him some flowers, because fresh and beautiful flowers could make him feel good and happy. What’s more, Jason asked me some questions about study. I will bring him my notebooks tomorrow and I will be patient to answer his questions at any time. I hope he can be better soon.

I like helping others. Firstly, helping others makes me happy. Secondly, helping others is also helping myself. All in all, a helpful person is welcomed everywhere. I will try my best to help others in the future.

【解析】

这是一篇话题作文，根据图表中的相关信息分享一下你帮助别人之后的快乐。主要从你做了什么、你的感受如何和将来你还会帮助别人吗三个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含图表中的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble. 所以我们有必要帮助那些有困难的人。

who are in trouble.是由who引导的定语从句。

【高分句型二】

I thought we should get him some flowers, because fresh and beautiful flowers could make him feel good and happy. 我想我们应该给他买些花，因为新鲜漂亮的花可以让他感觉良好和快乐。

句子because fresh and beautiful flowers could make him feel good and happy.是由because引导的原因状语从句。