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16．幸福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目 光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是…请以My happiness为话题，写一 件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情．要求：列出提纲，写出关键词，逻辑清晰，语言流畅，用词准确，80〜100词． 提示：所列提纲可以是短语或句子，所列关键词必须在文中出现．
（A）Outline：1．Happinessisimportantinourlife．
2．Myhappystory．．
3．Myhope．
Key words：happiness，important，putyourheartinto，giveup，believe，makeupmymind，love，hope．
（B）Happinessisimportantinourlife．Infact，happinessisalwaysaroundyouifyouputyourheartintoit．
Iwillneverforgetonething．OnceIhadabadmarkatamathtest．Iwasshyandafraidtomeetmyparents．ButwhenIgotbackhomelate，myparentsknewwhathappened，theysaidtome，"Itdoesn'tmatter，mychild．Rememberwe'llbealwaysbesideyouwhenyouneedhelp．Webelieveyoucanbebetternexttime．Nevergiveup!"Iwasmovedandmadeupmymindtoworkharderandharder．
Ifeelhappy．WheneverIamintrouble，Icanfeelmyparents'love．Iwanttobeagoodchildformyparents．Ihopeeveryonecanbehappyeveryday．．
分析 【高分句型一】
In fact，happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it事实上，如果我们用心，幸福一直在我们身边．
if引导的条件状语从句．
【高分句型二】
We believe you can be better next time我们相信下次你会更好．
believe 后是省略了that的宾语从句．
解答 （A）Outline：1．Happiness is important in our life．
2．My happy story．
3．My hope．
Key words：happiness，important，put your heart into，give up，believe，make up my mind，love，hope
（B）
Happiness is important in our life．（幸福很重要）In fact，happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it．【高分句型一】
I will never forget one thing．Once I had a bad mark at a math test．I was shy and afraid to meet my parents．But when I got back home late，my parents knew what happened，they said to me，"It doesn't matter，my child．Remember we'll be always beside you when you need help．We believe you can be better next time．【高分句型二】Never give up!"I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder．（我开心的故事）
I feel happy．Whenever I am in trouble，I can feel my parents'love．I want to be a good child for my parents．I hope everyone can be happy every day．（我的希望）
点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．
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7．Mike Smith：We have many after-class activities in school-English corner，hand-writing lessons，playing basketball，playing chess，dancing and so on．Students in our school can choose any kind of activities they like．
Jane White：I'm a member of the music club in our school．I can learn different kind of music instruments．It's fun．
Frank Green：I take park in drawing and English corner after class．I benefit a lot from the activities．I can not only improve my abilities of drawing and spoken English，but also make some new friends who have the same hobbies as me．
Amy young：Some teachers think after-class activities take up too much time．But as a student，I think it's necessary for schools to give us the chance to improve our other abilities after class．We are under great pressure with too much homework and exams．We need time to relax．
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Jane White：I'm a member of the music club in our school．I can learn different kind of music instruments．It's fun．
Frank Green：I take park in drawing and English corner after class．I benefit a lot from the activities．I can not only improve my abilities of drawing and spoken English，but also make some new friends who have the same hobbies as me．
Amy young：Some teachers think after-class activities take up too much time．But as a student，I think it's necessary for schools to give us the chance to improve our other abilities after class．We are under great pressure with too much homework and exams．We need time to relax．
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| Kinds of after-class activities | （81）English corner hand-writing lessons，playing basketball，（82）playing chess dancing，instrument playing and （83）drawing |
| Advantages of after-class activities | ●a good chance to improve students'other abilities ●a good chance to （84）make some new friends ●to help students to （85）relax |
8．December 25th is Christmas Day．（106）EAll the people come back to their homes to spend the day with their parents or their children．（107）AThe ringing bells tell people Christmas is coming．People sing and dance day and night．They have a good time．（108）FAnd there are some presents hanging from the trees here and there．People also put presents in children's stocking．In many places，Father Christmas himself brings presents to them．（109）BThere is a big bag on his back．In it there are lot of presents．Christmas is also a day when people enjoy all kinds of food．
（110）DThey died of cold and hunger on Christmas Day．
（110）DThey died of cold and hunger on Christmas Day．
| A．On Christmas Day，bells ring everywhere． B．He is a kind man and he is in red clothes． C．So on Christmas Day，all the families are very happy． D．But some poor people have no homes and have no food to eat． E．In most countries it is the most important day in the year． F．Most families buy a Christmas tree for their children． |
5．I was born in a poor family．My life，as it really is，is always filled with sadness and little joy．（41 ）D
In July last year，I was allowed to enter the only famous high school in my hometown．（42）A
I rushed to my home and told my parents．But my father didn't seem as excited as I was．He just kpt smoking without saying a word and my mother put her head down and couldn't help crying．
I knew very well what my family was like．My mum had been ill in bed for two years．We lived a hard life and I couldn't continue my schooling．I felt so upset but I could say nothing to my parents．（43）E
To my surprise，things completely changed before the beginning of the new term．My head teacher came to my family with some money，which had been raised by my schoolmates．He encouraged me，"Always have a dream．"（44）C
I have been studying hard since I entered the high school．Whenever I meet difficulties，I always think of my teacher and schoolmates．I have a college dream and I must work hard for it，no matter how hard life is．Just as a great man says，"（45）B"
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In July last year，I was allowed to enter the only famous high school in my hometown．（42）A
I rushed to my home and told my parents．But my father didn't seem as excited as I was．He just kpt smoking without saying a word and my mother put her head down and couldn't help crying．
I knew very well what my family was like．My mum had been ill in bed for two years．We lived a hard life and I couldn't continue my schooling．I felt so upset but I could say nothing to my parents．（43）E
To my surprise，things completely changed before the beginning of the new term．My head teacher came to my family with some money，which had been raised by my schoolmates．He encouraged me，"Always have a dream．"（44）C
I have been studying hard since I entered the high school．Whenever I meet difficulties，I always think of my teacher and schoolmates．I have a college dream and I must work hard for it，no matter how hard life is．Just as a great man says，"（45）B"
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| A．I couldn't believe the news! B．When one door shuts，another opens in life． C．With tears in my eyes，I stepped into the famous high school． D．However，no matter what happens，I can always face it bravely． E（涂AB）．I decided to help my father with his work to support my family． F（涂CD）．I was sad to hear that． |
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