Question

书面表达（本题20分）

在今年的“地球一小时(Earth Hour)”活动中，中国很多城市的人们都自觉熄灯一小时，体现了低碳生活(low-carbon life)的新理念。假定你是CCTV-9的记者，请你根据以下采访信息，用英语写一篇80词左右的新闻稿。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

Earth Hour in China

 

Thank you for joining CCTV’s Around China show！Now it’s 8:45 pm. during the famous Earth Hour. People in many cities have turned off their lights and are having a very special time. In Shanghai, some people are ___________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

Thank you for joining CCTV’s Around China show! Now it’s 8：45 p．m．during the famous Earth Hour．People in many cities have turned off their lights and are having a very special

time．In Shanghai，some people are taking a walk with their family．They feel very relaxed．In Beijing，some people are having a nice talk with their friends．And in Ningbo，some young

people are holding a party in the park，singing and dancing．Without lights，people can also

enjoy themselves．

Many people share with us their plans．Some say they will spend more time with their

families and friends．Others say they will try their best to protect the environment，like planting more trees，saving water and so on．What’s more， some people tell me that they will use

paper both sides．（drive less，ride bikes，use plastic bags less…）in their daily life．

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇让小作者介绍地球一小时，各个城市的人们所进行的活动和他们有什么计划来体现低碳生活。小作者把要求写的几点都表述得很清晰。另外，写作时，小作者还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者把列举的要点都写了进去。这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如And in Ningbo，some young people are holding a party in the park，singing and dancing．Without lights，people can also enjoy themselves．Others say they will try their best to protect the environment，like planting more trees，saving water and so on．有一些好的固定短语还有句子。

考点：提纲类作文。