Question

【题目】假设TV Guide 外文版将刊登文章介绍湖南电视台热播的电视节目《爸爸去哪儿》(Dad, Where Are We Going), 上周五你看过一期。请据此写一篇100词左右的英文观后感。内容提示如下：

1. 节目由五个明星爸爸和他们的孩子主演，深受各年龄段观众的喜爱：

2. 目的是鼓励亲子双方重视交流，对于人们有良好的影响；

3. 爸爸们以前没有时间陪孩子，现在已学会如何悉心照顾孩子；

4. 观后感想。

注意：

1.观后感须包括所有内容要点，要点语句通顺，意思连贯；

2.观后感的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：明星爸爸star father; 对于…有良好的影响 have a good effect on…

The program Dad, Where Are We Going is one of this year’s hottest TV programs. I saw it last Friday.

Answer 1

【答案】

The program Dad Where Are We Going? Is one of this year’s hottest TV programs? I saw it last Friday.Five star fathers and their children play the lead roles in the program. It is popular among people of all ages. The aim of the program is to encourage parents and children to play attention to the communication. It has a good effect on people. Before fathers had no time for children. Now they have learned how to take good care of their children. I think this TV program is very meaningful. We should be brave to deal with problems.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:pay attentionto注意；have effect on对……有影响；take care of照顾，关心等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。