题目内容
内容提示:赵刚今天有点感冒,头痛,嗓子痛且乏力。他看了医生,医生说他没什么大毛病,只要吃点药,多喝水,躺着休息一下,两天后就好了。
词数:60词左右。
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Zhao Gang had a little cold today. He had a headache and a sore throat. He felt tired. So he went to see a doctor. The doctor said he had nothing serious, but he had to take some medicine. He should drink more water. He should lie down and rest, then he would be OK two days later.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文要求我们根据题目中所给的内容写一篇短文。这篇短文的内容是关于赵刚的,他今天感冒了,去看了医生。医生说没什么大毛病。短文中所涉及的话题是生病和看医生,这样的话题在教材上出现过。因此学生们都学过怎样来表达疾病,以及针对不同的疾病,给出相应的建议。如have a cold, have a headache, have a sore throat等。在提建议的时候可以用should,后跟动词的原形。因此我们写作时只要按平时的练习要求,用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来就可以。但同时也要注意,这是一篇短文,因此要注意上下文的连接,使用一些恰当的连词,使短文意思连贯,表达流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇较好的作文。作者按照题目的要求将需要表达的内容完整的叙述了出来。作者写作时特别注意了该文应该使用的时态。根据短文的意思可知,这里叙述的是一件过去的事情,因此应该用一般过去时态,所以每个句子中的谓语动词都要过去式的形式,在这一点上,作者没有犯错,形式都很准确。关于疾病这一话题,是学生们比较熟悉的,平时也做过类似的练习,因此在提建议时,学生们还是比较得心应手的。另外这篇短文中作者也注意使用了一些连接词,如He had a headache and a sore throat、The doctor said he had nothing serious, but he had to take some medicine、He should lie down and rest, then he would be OK two days later中and, but, then的使用都很恰当。
考点:提纲类作文。
danger, few, hunger, get, man, be, they, many, not take, quiet, try, wolf |
Are all wild (野生的) animals always dangerous?
____1.of people think that all wild animals are____2. But, in fact, few of ___3. will eat man if he leaves them alone(不招惹它们). If you meet a lion, I think you will run away, but even a lion will avoid(避免) a man if it ___4.very hungry. Lions only kill and eat men when they are too old____5.their food, such as sheep and other animals.
We know some animals even are afraid of ____6. when they happen to(碰巧) see men. Some of them stand and look at a man for some time before they run away. The others ___7.care of him at all, but they walk ___8. in another direction. Wild animals only eat a man when they are afraid that the man ___9. to kill their young babies, or a man is shooting(开枪) at them and they are made angry
Next time you go to the park, please watch some animals such as tigers, lions and ____10.in the cages. You can find they don’t attack(攻击) people if you don’t make them angry.