Question

7．假如你是Jane，大明是你的好朋友，他以前成绩很好，自从家里有了电脑以后，大明总是以查资料为由，常常打游戏，导致成绩直线下降，他爸爸很着急．昨天大明还和他爸爸发生了争吵．你得知情况后也很着急，作为好朋友，请写封信劝劝大明．要求80字左右．
你得知情况后很着急．
中学生该怎样正确使用电脑．
学生该怎样理解父母
提示词：argue with sb．be worried  get information  understand each other  say sorry to sb．
Dear Daming，
I'm very glad to write to you．
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Yours，
Jane．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I'm sorry to hear that you have argued with your father yesterday．很遗憾听说你昨天跟你爸爸吵架了．
be sorry to do sth听到某事是很遗憾的/难过的；argued with sb和某人吵架．
【高分句型二】
You should make full use of time to study，instead of playing computers．你应当充分利用时间学习，而不是玩电脑游戏．
should表示建议；make full use of time to do sth充分利用时间做某事；instead of sth/doing sth代替某事或做某事．

解答 Dear Daming：
I'm sorry to hear that you have argued with your father yesterday．（表明自己的态度）【高分句型一】I am very worried about you．（表明自己的担心）We are friends，so I hope you can reduce the time of surfing the Internet and study hard．I also hope that you can use the Internet to get information．（提出希望）You should make full use of time to study，instead of playing computers．【高分句型二】Please do not quarrel with your father and say sorry to him．I believe that you can understand each other．If you follow my advice，I believe you can make it!（给出建议）
Yours
Jane

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