Question

【题目】书面表达

学生会要选新一任主席。假设你叫Kitty,请根据以下提示和要求给校长写一封推荐信(信的开头和结尾已给出)。

提示:1. 推荐Daniel担任学生会主席; 2. 推荐他的原因(包括能力、性格特征等,内容自拟); 3. 列举Daniel的一些事例。

要求:1. 有真情实感,语义连贯,中心突出,详略得当; 2. 词数100~120左右。

Dear Principal,

I am writing to recommend Daniel as the new chairperson of the Students' Union. I think he will be an excellent chairperson because he has many good personal qualities.

I hope that you agree with me.

Yours sincerely,

Kitty

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Principal,

I am writing to recommend Daniel as the new chairperson of the Students' Union. I think he will be an excellent chairperson because he has many good personal qualities.

Daniel is very helpful. He always does extra work in class. At school, he always helps other students with their schoolwork. He is also clever and hard-working. He is good at Chinese and English. He always gets good marks in tests. Daniel is also organized and never forgets to do the things he plans to do. He has organized many after-class activities well.

I think Daniel would be a great chairperson of the school Students' Union. I hope that you agree with me.

Yours sincerely,

Kitty

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以Kitty的身份给校长写一封推荐信，推荐Daniel来担任学生会的主席，并在信中说明推荐他的原因，并列举Daniel的一些具体事例证明。通过审题可知，这个题目要求我们写的是推荐信，信中应主要包括以下内容：首先在信的开头应点明写信目的；然后介绍Daniel的基本情况和你推荐他的理由，并用具体事例证明；最后对这封信的主题加以强调。因此这篇作文我们可以分三段来叙述。全文应以一般现在时态、第三人称单数来叙述，要特别注意谓语动词形式的变化，并正确使用be动词的形式。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用符合英语习惯的句式，如简单句：主谓宾结构或主系表结构。穿插使用较复杂的句式，如复合句和并列句，以及一些复杂的结构，如非谓语动词、插入语、固定短语和句型等。同时应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯、表达流畅。