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2.在初中即将毕业之际,请你以张明的名义给英国笔友Brian写一封感谢信,要点提示如下:
三年前你来到新的班级,没有朋友,感到孤独
三年中Brian多次给你写信,他在信中:
鼓励你多交朋友;
告诉你学好英语的方法;
和你分享快乐;
你变得…
近年来天津发生很大变化,你邀请他来天津游玩
参考词汇:分享快乐 share happiness
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个
(2)信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥
Dear Brian,
How time flies!We have been friends for three years.I’m writing to thank you for your help!
Three years ago,I came to a new class,and I had no friends,so I felt lonely.You wrote to me many times.In your letter,you encouraged me to make more friends and told me how to learn English well.During these three years,you shared happiness with me.And I became happy.In recent years,great changes have happened in Tianjin.Could you come and go on vacation in Tianjin?
Hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Zhang Ming.

分析 这是一篇给材料作文,给自己的好友Brain写一封感谢信.结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般过去时,人称为第一,二人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I came to…;you encouraged me to…;you shared…;I became…及Could you come…?等句式的应用.写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用.写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意文后要表达自己想见到好友的愿望.

解答 Dear Brian,
How time flies!We have been friends for three years.I’m writing to thank you for your help!
Three years ago,I came to a new class,and I had no friends,so I felt lonely.You wrote to me many times.In your letter,you encouraged me to make more friends and told me how to learn English well.During these three years,you shared happiness with me.And I became happy.In recent years,great changes have happened in Tianjin.Could you come and go on vacation in Tianjin?
Hope to see you soon!
                                                                                                                                  Yours,
                                                                                                                                          Zhang Ming

点评 本题是一篇提示性表格作文.写作时,要把所给的材料研究透,抓住重点,以便把所给信息条理清楚的表达出来,解答本题时,一定要注意时态和人称的使用,书写规范条理,尽量把所给信息都用上并有所拓展.

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